by amy r.

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January 29, 2013 04:15 AM UTC

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Deep like the ocean
light of the soul
oppression looms
just above the surface
descending into
the deep below
in tune, indigo child
cry your eyes out
stay wild
the truth spells itself out.

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Comments: 17

J W. Jan 29, 2013, 7:44am UTC

good poem

amy r. Jan 31, 2013, 12:38pm UTC

Thank you!

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Angela A. Jan 29, 2013, 10:14am UTC

This is very lovely friend.
If you are looking for a title, I would suggest calling it, "The truth"

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amy r. Jan 31, 2013, 12:38pm UTC

Thanks! :)

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Audrey Howitt Jan 29, 2013, 2:03pm UTC

Lovely write!

amy r. Feb 17, 2013, 12:30am UTC

Thank you!

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Rachel D. Jan 29, 2013, 2:14pm UTC

Very pretty.

amy r. Feb 17, 2013, 12:30am UTC

Thanks!

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Priscilla P. Jan 29, 2013, 3:05pm UTC

I really the comparisons as well as the imagery

amy r. Feb 17, 2013, 12:29am UTC

Thanks!

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Bernard C. Jan 30, 2013, 3:42am UTC

Sounds like the mermaid is expectant - Nice poem well put :-)

amy r. Feb 17, 2013, 12:29am UTC

She's on her way, I have this thing with water, lol.

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Tessa D. Jan 31, 2013, 7:49pm UTC

I like it

amy r. Feb 17, 2013, 12:29am UTC

Thanks, I had it up on my facebook in my profile and I said to myself, humm, Gather, lol.

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michele r. Feb 5, 2013, 8:24pm UTC

Very good!
Thank you for posting to ~50~Views~R~US~

amy r. Feb 17, 2013, 12:28am UTC

Thanks for reading it!

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michele r. Apr 17, 2013, 10:54pm UTC

Thanks for posting to ~50~Views~R~US!
Your content has reached over 50 views and will now be removed from the group!

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